Last week I had to honor of being a guest on Mia Marlowe’s Blog for a Red Pencil Thursday. If you are an author and havent swung by to check out her blog. Do so. Now.

Why you ask?

Because the advise that comes out of those blog posts are incredibly valuable. Not to mention the work she and her followers will put into your work in progress helps to get your mind working on what needs tightening up. Before she posts she will get your responses to her suggestions. It was a great experience.

I enjoyed the experience so much that I have thought that I would share not only that snippet with you folks but also a few more over the next few weeks to get your input.  So stay tuned every Monday for a new snippet of book two in the Stan Brookshire series–Dragon Twins!